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2018年9月13日 英文议论文

家长该不该让自己的孩子参加带冒险性的户外活动?球哥选择了反方,以下是他向外教老师Mr. Kirk提交的一篇五段体议论文——

Should Parents Allow Their Children to Participate in Risky Activities?

There are thousands of young kids around the world, willing to try new things, but should the parents allow them to participate in risky activities? My answer is no! Because children are immature in making good choices and they are usually lack of life abilities.

Firstly, most children can’t distinguish between right and wrong and they can’t evaluate the situation correctly, nor predict danger. For example, Abby Sunderland, who attempted to sail solo around the world at the age of sixteen failed as the gigantic waves destroyed the mast of her yacht, and three countries started a huge search and rescue operation. Fortunately, she was saved. But Miss Luck can't care for all creatures, not everyone can be as luck as Abby. In fact, there are only a few of teenagers can be succeeded in risky activities. Most of the children just cause a massive rescue, big chaos, and even lose their lives. The Chinese Law of Marriage stipulates that parents have the right and obligation to protect minor children. A lot of matters are not things a minor child should be able to deal with. Allowing their children to do so is potentially irresponsible for the parents, and if the parents really do so, they will be against the law.

Secondly, children are lack of abilities. When the danger which children don’t realize or predict really comes, children would have few methods to deal with, as they don’t have strong bodies, strong wills and abundant knowledge reserve. Xi Jinping, the President of China, has emphasized many times that students from primary school to high school should have at least one hour’s physical practice every day in order to have a strong body that can adapt different natural environment. As we all know, strength is useful in all kinds of situation. If we don’t get a good grade in 1000 meters’ race, we will probably not be able to walk 20 kilometers a day. We will not be able to survive without a strong will. Knowledge is also important to prevent children from eating poison food, or help them communicate with the outside world.

Lastly, parents can offer a safe adventure rather than spending money and time in searching their children. As we all know, experience is important and failure breeds success. The research shows 25% of the children who attend wild hiking twice a year have stronger wills and better behaviors then those who don’t do so. In this example, the Sunderland can ask a boat to follow her yacht in case of accidents. Doing this would make the journey much safer, but the experience and fun for Abby won’t become any less. Some people might say: “Look at how many teenagers die in cars every year. Should we let teenagers drive cars? I think it would be silly if we don’t.” Well, it is true, but teenagers have accidents because they haven’t got enough experience. Their parents should let them go to driving schools or practice driving in a vast place.

Taking a big risk is never the best idea for a young kid and his parents. Children are not good at judging and living in the wild, and parents actually have better choices than allow their children to participate in risky activities.

尽管语言还很稚嫩,论证还不够有力,但这就是小哥目前的水平。能尽力表达,这点值得称赞。

期待外教的批阅。

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育儿网网友 210.13.68.*** 发表于2018-09-18 15:26:24

能写这么长了。

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